Wednesday's Three Word Wednesday
The words over at Three Word Wednesday are darkness, patronize and weaken.
The Path
The voice cries out from the darkness,
Angry and stalking,
It weakens my resolve,
To stay true,
To the path that cuts the gloom,
The tangled webs,
The dark hearts,
The crushed dreams,
The howls yet grow stronger,
And still I walk,
Through the valley of the shadow,
Determined not to stumble,
As the shrill voice patronizes,
The choices,
The desires,
The life,
The very path I choose to follow
The Path
The voice cries out from the darkness,
Angry and stalking,
It weakens my resolve,
To stay true,
To the path that cuts the gloom,
The tangled webs,
The dark hearts,
The crushed dreams,
The howls yet grow stronger,
And still I walk,
Through the valley of the shadow,
Determined not to stumble,
As the shrill voice patronizes,
The choices,
The desires,
The life,
The very path I choose to follow
Comments
Great words.
At least to me...Great write, Thom.
The determination emotion shows up through these words!
Have a great day:)
I hope you're feeling better!
I hope you feel better soon. The flu sucks.
Constructive criticism: Uncharacteristically (it's the flu talking no doubt) you relied on cliches in a couple of places (tangled webs, crushed dreams). But still a good piece!
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I just recovered from flu. Hope you did too!
patronising darkness weakens me
The Flu really gets your mind flowing Thom!
great job!