OneWord - Twine

Tough day at OneWord. Twine. Yikes. Here's what I came up with, in 60 seconds:

The ball in the pit of his stomach began to unravel, something akin to dropping a bundle of twine off a balcony. A long strand of worry, growing by the foot. He'd tried antacids, tonics. What he needed was salvation.
He needed to forgive.

6 comments:

Cathryn said...

Great image! and in 60 seconds, no less.

Tammie Lee said...

I deeply enjoy the way you perceive life. This is wonderful.

Old Grizz said...

not bad for 60 seconds. think what you could have accomplished in 61

PurestGreen said...

Have wandered over from Tammie Lee's blog. Always in the mood for writing that moves me, rattles me, takes me away. And here you are - hooray!

Daily Panic said...

i like the twine being emotions.
my thoughts would have gone to gardening.

Dee Martin said...

wow I'm with Grizz - what would you have done with more time! "A long strand of worry, growing by the foot" - We've all had nights of that.