Tuesday's NaiSaiKu Challenge
Time again for the NaiSaiKu Challenge. A poem built a little like a haiku, but different. The title is in the middle.
lost in the blackness,
alone with thoughts all jumbled,
slumber does not come,
TROUBLES OF THE MIND
slumber’s fickle muse,
alone with thoughts all jumbled,
absorbed by blackness
lost in the blackness,
alone with thoughts all jumbled,
slumber does not come,
TROUBLES OF THE MIND
slumber’s fickle muse,
alone with thoughts all jumbled,
absorbed by blackness
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PS - I grew up in South Dakota so am enjoying the familiarity of places and things in your Tweets.
Nicely!