Tuesday's NaiSaiKu Challenge

Time for another NaiSaiKu Challenge. It’s poetry, but with a twist.

hunter dances slow,
she’s all hips, exotic swirl,
zeros on her prey,
NAILS, LIKE RAZORS PIERCE
hunter dances slow,
she’s all hips, exotic swirl,
drinks blood, sticky-sweet

5 comments:

Janet Jarrell said...

I don't know whether to be nervous or aroused - She! Well done.

andy said...

Oooh! I can feel this!! Ouch!!!

Stan Ski said...

Yeah...cool!

Donna said...

Blood? Hmmmm ... okay.

Tumblewords: said...

This has a predatory chill - terrific!