Wednesday's Three Word Wednesday
The word prompts over at 3WW are history, narrow and spent. I hereby throw a challenge to TheRobRogers to finally hop on the bandwagon and try 3WW.
And now, a Fiction in 58 for our reading pleasure.
A Little Nudge
He had a history of narrow focus.
The world would spin around him and he couldn’t see the kaleidoscope.
He spent his time in a cocoon. Insulated, clean, organized.
She moved into the apartment across the hall.
He began to watch for her in the peep hole.
Tonight, she knocked. She carried Chinese take-out.
His throat went dry.
And now, a Fiction in 58 for our reading pleasure.
A Little Nudge
He had a history of narrow focus.
The world would spin around him and he couldn’t see the kaleidoscope.
He spent his time in a cocoon. Insulated, clean, organized.
She moved into the apartment across the hall.
He began to watch for her in the peep hole.
Tonight, she knocked. She carried Chinese take-out.
His throat went dry.
Comments
Kinda like your flash fiction, direct and to the point.
Rose
xo
Nicely done.
I hope she gets what she came calling for.
Mine's up at:
http://bellamocha.wordpress.com/2008/07/16/three-word-wednesday-xcv/
bella:)
Stay away from female neighbors with Chinese take-out, and dry throats! ;-)
-- SnarkyPants
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PS I don't have anything to do with the site but I do like it.
b
Glad to see you're doing well. I'm so very happy for you!