Tuesday's NaiSaiKu Challenge

You don't know about the NaiSaiKu Challenge? It's poetry, which can be light and airy, or dark and brooding. I chose brooding. A metaphor for people who take advantage of situations.

they prey on the weaklings,
baring teeth, slick with saliva,
waiting, watching, yearning,
DARK HEARTS CONSOLE FEAR
waiting, watching, yearning,
baring teeth, slick with saliva,
they prey on the weaklings

4 comments:

Marc Latham said...

Very brooding Thom, nasty but nice!

Andy Sewina said...

Clever observation, there's a growing number of these people who seek to take advantage of the weak.

Stan Ski said...

Too many do-gooders...

Janet Jarrell said...

This one has bite!

Sometimes dark hearts conceal fear too.