The NaisaiKu Challenge

A NaisaiKu is a poem with a specific syllable count that builds toward the title. A fun, challenging exercise.

Tender kiss ignites
forgotten passions in her
heart flutters, sweat, doubt
LIKE A SCHOOLGIRL CRUSH
Heart flutters, sweat, doubt
Forgotten passions in her
Tender kiss ignites

4 comments:

Wendy Naisa said...

Hiya Thom, you have a wonderful way with words.

Thanks for taking The NaiSaiKu Challenge? this week.

zoya gautam said...

..hi thomg,
i do trust u to believe in others(don't know if being "a realist" includes that)but i think i shouldn't have visited ur blog this time around-
-because my proposed 'naisaiku' entry for week 10 was-

"infatuation
breaks circadian rythms
a little girl's heart
breaks circadian rythms
infatuation "

but that's how life goes..many thanks for sharing ur interesting write-up..

Beloved Dreamer said...

Thom, liked this one very much. I have forgotten what love feels like.
Well done friend.


love-bd

SweetTalkingGuy said...

Phew, I think you've re-kindled something in me too!

Love, what a wonderful thing!!