The NaisaiKu Challenge

A NaisaiKu is a poem with a specific syllable count that builds toward the title. A fun, challenging exercise.

Tender kiss ignites
forgotten passions in her
heart flutters, sweat, doubt
Heart flutters, sweat, doubt
Forgotten passions in her
Tender kiss ignites


Wendy Naisa said...

Hiya Thom, you have a wonderful way with words.

Thanks for taking The NaiSaiKu Challenge? this week.

zoya gautam said...

..hi thomg,
i do trust u to believe in others(don't know if being "a realist" includes that)but i think i shouldn't have visited ur blog this time around-
-because my proposed 'naisaiku' entry for week 10 was-

breaks circadian rythms
a little girl's heart
breaks circadian rythms
infatuation "

but that's how life goes..many thanks for sharing ur interesting write-up..

Beloved Dreamer said...

Thom, liked this one very much. I have forgotten what love feels like.
Well done friend.


SweetTalkingGuy said...

Phew, I think you've re-kindled something in me too!

Love, what a wonderful thing!!