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An American Sentence

An American Sentence is a 17-syllable haiku, of sorts.

"A tempest of feeling, he beats a fist on cold windows – laughter, tears."
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Sepiru Chris said…
When you concatenate emotions, Thom, they gain rather than lose power.

I was serious in that question I posed the other day...
10:14 AM
Shadow said…
wow, so few words, so powerful!
10:44 AM
Cassiopeia Rises said…
Oh Tom I really like this one. I am learning the old 5-7-5 doesn't always cut it. This does my friend. Well done.


love-bd
10:54 AM
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