An American Sentence

An American Sentence is a 17-syllable haiku, of sorts.

"A tempest of feeling, he beats a fist on cold windows – laughter, tears."

3 comments:

Sepiru Chris said...

When you concatenate emotions, Thom, they gain rather than lose power.

I was serious in that question I posed the other day...

Shadow said...

wow, so few words, so powerful!

Beloved Dreamer said...

Oh Tom I really like this one. I am learning the old 5-7-5 doesn't always cut it. This does my friend. Well done.


love-bd