You're thinking, "Hey, a sentence is all I get? A 17-syllable one at that?"
It's not as easy as it looks.
It is the American Sentence.
“Buried in warm sheets, he stares at ceiling swirls hoping for clarity.”
- ThomG
- Thom Gabrukiewicz is both a communicator and a writer of flash fiction. Most of what he writes is kind of dark, with occasional forays into the light. He’s a winner of some awards and has covered two Winter Olympics. He’s also written a guidebook about hiking with dogs. He’s fiercely loyal and has a malevolent side that seems to visit less and less. He’s both a hopeless romantic and a realist. He's currently working on community wellness issues in Wyoming.
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At one time I wrote a series of American Sentences.
Please do post it at the Poetry Train being run each Monday!
Thanks!
What a cool idea! I'll have to explore this. I like your sentence... it really is poetry.
A paragraph in 17 syllables! I like how the word "buried" can have more than one meaning!
Thanks for posting in Poetry train. However, you were supposed to leave the post URL. Not the blog one!
For now thats ok, too. I think!
*grin*
As you must know, prose too is very welcome.
nice one
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