NaiSaiKu Challenge

It's poetry, with a twist. It's the NaiSaiKu Challenge.

rain, like tears, drifts upon windows,
droplets expand streetlight gloom,
cool glass tempers a furrowed brow,
ANOTHER INSOMNIAC NIGHT
cool glass tempers a furrowed brow,
droplets expand streetlight gloom
rain, like tears, drifts upon windows

5 comments:

Wendy Naisa said...

Hi Thom, thanks for posting this, can't wait to see what's happening at 3WW..

I can just see that poor guy, squinting through the soaking glass wondering why he can't get some sleep.

I did one about the Tuesday rain for NaPoWriMo.

Andy

Jane Doe said...

As one who has spent many sleepless nights staring out into the rain, I can relate to this. It is beautifully written.

Dee Martin said...

this has such a feel for me - I can feel the glass on my forehead, cold.

Stan Ski said...

This is a feeling I know well.

Tumblewords: said...

Ah, I can feel this one -