NaiSaiKu Challenge

It’s Tuesday, time for the NaiSaiKu challenge. It’s poetry. This is for my friend, Q.

eyes open in focus, she smiles,
a squeeze of the hand, reassuring,
it’s not so bad, she’s telling you,
DEATH IS JUST A NEW BEGINNING
it’s not so bad, she’s telling you,
a squeeze of the hand, reassuring,
eyes open in focus, she smiles

7 comments:

quin browne said...

i so hate when something makes me cry.


today, i don't mind that this piece did just that.. made me cry.

Andy Sewina said...

Hi Thom, wise words and reassuring.

Thanks for posting!

Sh@KiR@ CK said...

Very beautiful tribute.
So honest yet tender.

I have done a NaiSaiku Challengehere
Do tell me what you think?
hugs
shakira

Stan Ski said...

I hope, when my time comes, I can face it so positively.
A thought provoking one today.

~*. D E E P A .* ~ said...

kinda scary ...
just finished a novel "The Crocodile Bird" in which the murderer was a woman .... and she indirectly talks of death

Dee Martin said...

that was a sweet thing to do.

Tumblewords: said...

Lot of depth in this - it's rather like a flash! Nice.