Tuesday's NaiSaiKu Challenge

Haven't participated in ages. A NaiSaiKu is a fun poetry structure based on haiku.

paint chips like razors,
shards of glass crunch under boots,
wild beasts find refuge
wild beasts find refuge,
shards of glass crunch under boots,
paint chips like razors


Andy Sewina said...

Hi Thom, creatively described! It sounds so atmospheric and for some reason reminds me of those abandond glass bottle houses in Arizona.

Thanks for posting to The NaiSaiKu challenge!!

Stan Ski said...

Vivid image - puts us right in there.

Tumblewords: said...

I can hear these images. Neat read!