Tuesday's NaiSaiKu Challenge

Written for the NaiSaiKu Challenge. A fun way to stretch your poetry legs, there.

quiet permeates,
solitude, a cold comfort,
life’s little blunders,
KNOCKING AT YOUR DOOR
life’s little blunders,
solitude, a cold comfort,
silence saturates

3 comments:

Andy Sewina said...

Hi Thom, thanks for playing, silence saturates, don't it just!

gautami tripathy said...

Loved the closing and the opening..

The Stone Diaries by Carol Shields

Janet Jarrell said...

quiet permeates
silence saturates

Nice on the tongue.