Monday's Fiction in 58
The idea is to create a complete thought, a slice of story, in 58 words. Here you go:
Proposal
It was after their lovemaking, in the dull quiet following the playful banter of their frenzy.
Her head rested on his stomach, auburn hair tumbling across her face as he breathed. She traced lazy circles around his nipples with a finger. He put a warm hand on her exposed back.
“Make an honest man of me,” he whispered.
Proposal
It was after their lovemaking, in the dull quiet following the playful banter of their frenzy.
Her head rested on his stomach, auburn hair tumbling across her face as he breathed. She traced lazy circles around his nipples with a finger. He put a warm hand on her exposed back.
“Make an honest man of me,” he whispered.
Comments
Meh - we get entirely too serious sometimes - glad I could provide a little comic relief!!
Dee, I knew what you meant, but missalister's comment was too funny! LOL!