Pub Renga (poetry and beer)
After a long absence, made it down to pub night Wednesday to see old friends, hang out in dark corners, have a beer. We started to talk about writing, someone asked what the prompt was at Three Word Wednesday - awkward, kitchen, obsessed - and since Boots already had one of her notebooks out, we did some collaborative poetry.
We tried Renga, the form of Japanese collaborative poetry that's built something on a series of haiku. There is much history and a lot of rules, so we didn't hit the mark (exactly). But it was fun, and we had five people working on it. I promised to post it.
Beer was involved in the creation of this piece (disclaimer).
But it contains all three 3WW prompts:
Pub Renga
California ales
serial monogamy
lets get a divorce
my high school boyfriend
awkward kitchen tools
time travel fantasy - not!
Fucking in the woods
pine needles brush my instep
duff covers my crack
rules of engagement
are a little obsessive
lets go wash our hands
naked moonlight sex
reality, harsh mistress
glow in the dark ass
glow wakes the cuckoo
a happy song greets the morn
orange walls - small room
the meds have kicked in
the eagles have moved beyond
I miss the needles (pine)
new chapter of life
does the great blue heron care?
perched in swampy fields
bear swims to his death
waves of nausea, my head spins
thoughts of bleached-white bones
for the bear, live now
live boldly, for the moment
I'm all out of love
We tried Renga, the form of Japanese collaborative poetry that's built something on a series of haiku. There is much history and a lot of rules, so we didn't hit the mark (exactly). But it was fun, and we had five people working on it. I promised to post it.
Beer was involved in the creation of this piece (disclaimer).
But it contains all three 3WW prompts:
Pub Renga
California ales
serial monogamy
lets get a divorce
my high school boyfriend
awkward kitchen tools
time travel fantasy - not!
Fucking in the woods
pine needles brush my instep
duff covers my crack
rules of engagement
are a little obsessive
lets go wash our hands
naked moonlight sex
reality, harsh mistress
glow in the dark ass
glow wakes the cuckoo
a happy song greets the morn
orange walls - small room
the meds have kicked in
the eagles have moved beyond
I miss the needles (pine)
new chapter of life
does the great blue heron care?
perched in swampy fields
bear swims to his death
waves of nausea, my head spins
thoughts of bleached-white bones
for the bear, live now
live boldly, for the moment
I'm all out of love
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