NaiSaiKu Challenge

It’s Tuesday, time for the NaiSaiKu challenge. It’s poetry. This is for my friend, Q.

eyes open in focus, she smiles,
a squeeze of the hand, reassuring,
it’s not so bad, she’s telling you,
DEATH IS JUST A NEW BEGINNING
it’s not so bad, she’s telling you,
a squeeze of the hand, reassuring,
eyes open in focus, she smiles

Comments

quin browne said…
i so hate when something makes me cry.


today, i don't mind that this piece did just that.. made me cry.
Andy Sewina said…
Hi Thom, wise words and reassuring.

Thanks for posting!
Unknown said…
Very beautiful tribute.
So honest yet tender.

I have done a NaiSaiku Challengehere
Do tell me what you think?
hugs
shakira
Stan Ski said…
I hope, when my time comes, I can face it so positively.
A thought provoking one today.
kinda scary ...
just finished a novel "The Crocodile Bird" in which the murderer was a woman .... and she indirectly talks of death
Dee Martin said…
that was a sweet thing to do.
Tumblewords: said…
Lot of depth in this - it's rather like a flash! Nice.

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