The NaiSaiKu Challenge
I’m a little late, but here’s my submission for the NaiSaiKu Challenge:
gloom, like storm clouds, swell,
paralyzed, shut off, ailing,
hopeless thoughts burble,
IT’S MELANCHOLY
hopeless thoughts burble
paralyzed, shut off, ailing,
gloom, like storm clouds, swell
gloom, like storm clouds, swell,
paralyzed, shut off, ailing,
hopeless thoughts burble,
IT’S MELANCHOLY
hopeless thoughts burble
paralyzed, shut off, ailing,
gloom, like storm clouds, swell
Comments
Many thanks for posting, and it's never too late to take The NaiSaiKu Chalenge?
vibrant with the agonies
a flower injuredwith such vibrant agonies
was melancholy ..
{ to lady diana / diana princess of wales - }