The NaisaiKu Challenge
A NaisaiKu is a poem with a specific syllable count that builds toward the title. A fun, challenging exercise.
Tender kiss ignites
forgotten passions in her
heart flutters, sweat, doubt
LIKE A SCHOOLGIRL CRUSH
Heart flutters, sweat, doubt
Forgotten passions in her
Tender kiss ignites
Tender kiss ignites
forgotten passions in her
heart flutters, sweat, doubt
LIKE A SCHOOLGIRL CRUSH
Heart flutters, sweat, doubt
Forgotten passions in her
Tender kiss ignites
Comments
Thanks for taking The NaiSaiKu Challenge? this week.
i do trust u to believe in others(don't know if being "a realist" includes that)but i think i shouldn't have visited ur blog this time around-
-because my proposed 'naisaiku' entry for week 10 was-
"infatuation
breaks circadian rythms
a little girl's heart
breaks circadian rythms
infatuation "
but that's how life goes..many thanks for sharing ur interesting write-up..
Well done friend.
love-bd
Love, what a wonderful thing!!