Tuesday's NaiSaiKu Challenge

Time for another NaiSaiKu Challenge. It’s poetry, but with a twist.

hunter dances slow,
she’s all hips, exotic swirl,
zeros on her prey,
NAILS, LIKE RAZORS PIERCE
hunter dances slow,
she’s all hips, exotic swirl,
drinks blood, sticky-sweet

Comments

Janet Jarrell said…
I don't know whether to be nervous or aroused - She! Well done.
andy said…
Oooh! I can feel this!! Ouch!!!
Stan Ski said…
Yeah...cool!
Donna said…
Blood? Hmmmm ... okay.
Tumblewords: said…
This has a predatory chill - terrific!

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